Ms. Saki
She used to go to swimming class and Japanese abacus class when she was child. Surprisingly she went there for 5 years. I also went to swimming class but it was just a few years so I really admire her.
Her presentation was generally good I think but time to time I couldn't listen to her because of another voice sound so I would like her to speak more loudly.
Mr. Kakeru
He was likely to be sick so he went to the hospital many times when he was child. And he really likes cartoon so he gathered many comic books. I love cartoon too, I understood him very well.
He didn't use anything to illustrate just talking, which made me confused sometimes, that is why I want him to use some pictures or something like that.
Ms. Mio
She told about her hometown . She lived in Matuura, Nagasaki when she was child. After that she moved to Sasebo in Nagasaki and then she lived in Kumamoto. She said " I was very enjoyed visiting Matuura with her brother when she was in kindergarten.
She was almost good and her presentation was concise. I recommend to her " you should show your picture or paper more longly."
Ms. Aya
She had a curfew that she had to go home by 6 o'clock when she was child. She said " Thanks to Mom I could be a punctual and I appreciate her."I didn't have a curfew like her, if I had a curfew I would have been like her.
Her presentation was so nice, but I want her to try eye contact.
Ms. Mako
She used to go to Piano class. And she belonged to brass band for 8 years, she played trumpet or tuber. I cannot play any instrument so I really respect her.
Her presentation was nothing to be desired and to the point so it is easy to understand her. But I want her to try to speak more loudly a little bit.
My presentation
I told about my self for instance where I was born, How was my childhood, like that. In my presentation I grinned so often that is my shortcoming.
Your presentation was pretty good. You made us laugh many times during your presentation, so I understood what you said while enjoying it.
ReplyDeleteBut I think if you use more visual resources like graphs, your presentation would be better one.
I think your presentation is exciting and appealing, but I wanted to know your change from your childhood. You said you were a noisy boy and you became a calm person when you were in high school. I think you are bright, but sometimes calm, and you can judge a situation with a variety of ideas. Please tell me the tips.
ReplyDeleteI think your presentation was very good and very interesting. You used visual resources effectively and took eye contact with us. If you assemble what you wanted to say in order, we could understand what you wanted to tell us more easily.
ReplyDeleteYour facial expression while you were talking was good! I was interesting to listen your presentation. And also you had many eye contacts and gestures.
ReplyDeleteI want to do like you!
I think you should do more eyecontact. If you could, your speech would be more better.
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